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Writing a Thesis Statement practice questions

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Answer key with explanations

1. The prompt asks: Should students be allowed to eat lunch outside when the weather is good? Which choice is a thesis statement that answers the prompt?

   Answer: Students should be allowed to eat lunch outside in good weather because the fresh air and the break help them return to class refreshed.. The last choice answers the prompt, takes a position, and gives a reason that a reader could dispute. The first choice is only a topic. The second is a fact, which cannot be argued. The third is an announcement, because it says what the essay will do and not what the writer claims.

2. Which sentence is an announcement rather than a thesis?

   Answer: In this essay, I will talk about recycling at our school.. An announcement says what the writer will do, not what the writer claims. The second choice only says that the essay will talk about recycling. The other three each take a position and give a reason, so they are thesis statements.

3. A student’s weak thesis is Phones are a problem at school. Which revision is the most specific and arguable?

   Answer: Schools should require students to store phones in lockers during class because notifications pull attention away from lessons.. The third choice says who should do what, takes a position a reader could dispute, and gives a reason. The first choice is just as vague as the original. The second is a fact. The fourth is an announcement.

4. A teacher assigns an informative essay about how butterflies grow. Which sentence is the best thesis for it?

   Answer: A butterfly changes form in four stages: egg, caterpillar, chrysalis, and adult.. An informative thesis is a specific controlling idea that organizes the explanation. The first choice names the central idea (a change in form) and the four stages the essay will explain. The second is an argument. The third is an announcement. The fourth is an opinion, not an explanation.

5. The prompt asks for a literary analysis of Romeo and Juliet. Which sentence is the strongest thesis?

   Answer: In Romeo and Juliet, Shakespeare suggests that haste is as dangerous as hatred, since the lovers’ rushed decisions speed them toward their deaths.. A literary thesis makes a claim about what the work shows, supported by evidence from the text. The last choice states an interpretation (haste is as dangerous as hatred) and points to its evidence (the lovers’ rushed decisions). The first choice is a fact. The second is an announcement. The third is a true plot summary, but it makes no claim that could be argued.

6. In a standard school essay, where does the thesis statement usually go?

   Answer: At the end of the introduction. The introduction usually moves from a hook to background to the thesis, so the thesis comes at the end of the introduction. Body paragraphs support the thesis, and the conclusion returns to it, but neither is where it is first stated.

7. Which thesis is focused on one clear claim?

   Answer: Our school should install covered bike racks because covered racks keep bikes dry and make biking to school easier.. The last choice makes one claim and gives reasons that all support it. The first choice makes three unrelated claims. The second is vague and covers several subjects. The third is only a topic with a label.

8. The weak thesis School clubs are good. needs revising. Which revision is the most specific, arguable, and focused?

   Answer: Schools should encourage every student to join at least one club because clubs help students make friends and practice teamwork outside class.. The second choice says who should do what, takes a position, and gives focused reasons. The first choice is too broad to support. The third is as vague as the original. The fourth is a fact with no claim.

9. Here is a thesis: Schools should offer free peer tutoring because students often learn well from classmates and tutors build confidence. Which sentence would best begin a body paragraph that supports the first reason?

   Answer: Students often learn well from classmates because peers explain ideas in familiar words.. A body paragraph begins with a topic sentence that states one reason from the thesis. The first choice states the first reason, that students learn well from classmates, and gives a point that evidence could support. The second is a fact that proves nothing. The third points away from the thesis. The fourth is off topic.

10. Which sentence is a road-map thesis?

    Answer: Our school should switch to digital textbooks because they cost less, weigh less in backpacks, and can be updated easily.. A road-map thesis names the main reasons, in the order the body paragraphs will follow. The third choice lists three specific reasons. The first has a claim but no reasons. The second gives only one vague reason. The fourth is a question.